ext_61909 ([identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_melodic_/) wrote in [personal profile] maccadole 2017-02-01 11:57 pm (UTC)

Oh holy hell that was so smoking hot. I think you broke my brain… No, I know you broke my brain. Why do I always make the mistake of reading the stories on public transport? Either way, I hope everyone on the train looked over my shoulder and got a glimpse of this fantastic story.

You really had me going at the beginning, I was like… Well this is an interesting twist but I was totally up for the ride. When we realized it was a dream everything made a bit more sense but I just knew there was more to come. I love how brazen James was just going at it in bed and how Albus was lit on fire by his brothers actions.

And then James just jumps in and gives Albus one of the best rim jobs ever… Seriously I could read hundreds and hundreds of more words of James's mouth all over Albus's hole.

What a delicious and delectable story. I read the whole thing with my jaw dropped wide. The ending was very lovely as well. I just want to read more and more of your James and Albus … This could easily be a fantastic series ;-)

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