OMG!! OMG NIPPLES AND FINGER LICKING and omg bed sharing and bonding and so much forced proximity and NIPPLES! God, that was hot, and also hilarious ― their banter was so them, and I loved Harry’s POV, so much!!! Omg he was so put out, stuffing things in the closet and then Malfoy being all prim and composed and tailored pyjamas!!! Omg Malfoy, you posh wanker, I love it so much <3
Malfoy is appallingly gorgeous in this, I love the imagery you cast around him:
When he blinked his eyes open, almost half-asleep by that point, he saw Malfoy's hair had slid down to cover half his eye, the rest fanning out on the pillow. His mouth was a little open, and he looked... peaceful.
Oh gosh, such a luscious description, and so vivid, and the scar!! God I loved that, Harry watching Malfoy, and omgggggg this:
It worked for a moment, before his eyes betrayed him and wandered across Malfoy's pale skin to his nipple. It looked so small and soft, the little nub. All bright and pink. Overcome with the strangest burning in his veins, Harry lifted his free hand and touched his fingertip to it.
GUH AJHDJGAGSKGA that is crazy hot!!! Sdjkhasdjsj, omg, and Harry touching it over and then moving to the scar while Malfoy is asleeeepppppp, it’s so intensely erotic, and “Ogle your artwork if you must, Potter, but don't you dare go all soppy. It's going to be a very long week if you start that now.” is the most perfectly Malfoy thing to have ever been said! I love the reference to their history while they are in bed, Malfoy assuming Harry is overcome with sentimentality while he is, in fact, overcome with a flushed desire to touch (and maybe a bit of sentimentality too), they are so very them!! And don’t get me started on the finger licking, or you will never hear the end of it, sjdhfkgahj!!! (never stop writing that though, omg, it’s amazing)
Omg and the ending!!! I hope you know that this sequel now needs to exist! *hands in the air, waving them like she does in fact care, a lot, about these guys getting off on each other* Gorgeous work, they are so very, very perfectly them darling!!
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Date: 2017-04-01 01:07 am (UTC)Malfoy is appallingly gorgeous in this, I love the imagery you cast around him:
When he blinked his eyes open, almost half-asleep by that point, he saw Malfoy's hair had slid down to cover half his eye, the rest fanning out on the pillow. His mouth was a little open, and he looked... peaceful.
Oh gosh, such a luscious description, and so vivid, and the scar!! God I loved that, Harry watching Malfoy, and omgggggg this:
It worked for a moment, before his eyes betrayed him and wandered across Malfoy's pale skin to his nipple. It looked so small and soft, the little nub. All bright and pink. Overcome with the strangest burning in his veins, Harry lifted his free hand and touched his fingertip to it.
GUH AJHDJGAGSKGA that is crazy hot!!! Sdjkhasdjsj, omg, and Harry touching it over and then moving to the scar while Malfoy is asleeeepppppp, it’s so intensely erotic, and “Ogle your artwork if you must, Potter, but don't you dare go all soppy. It's going to be a very long week if you start that now.” is the most perfectly Malfoy thing to have ever been said! I love the reference to their history while they are in bed, Malfoy assuming Harry is overcome with sentimentality while he is, in fact, overcome with a flushed desire to touch (and maybe a bit of sentimentality too), they are so very them!! And don’t get me started on the finger licking, or you will never hear the end of it, sjdhfkgahj!!! (never stop writing that though, omg, it’s amazing)
Omg and the ending!!! I hope you know that this sequel now needs to exist! *hands in the air, waving them like she does in fact care, a lot, about these guys getting off on each other* Gorgeous work, they are so very, very perfectly them darling!!
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