(Not so) Silent Night [Albus Severus/James Sirius, NC-17]

[maccadole]

Title: (Not so) Silent Night
Author: maccadole
Pairing: Albus Severus/James Sirius
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: ~11500
Content/Warnings: Sibling incest, pining, wanking, handjob, blowjob, rimming, fingering, Albus is 17
Summary: Having to share a room with one's sibling over the holidays could drive anyone mad, but for Albus it's a whole new level of frustration.
Notes: Dear cap_bookworm, at first this wasn't supposed to be a birthday gift, but then it was, and then it... still was. Sort of. But ~life happened, and here we are. Still, happy belated birthday, 11 million years later. Also, thank you carpemermaid for looking this over for me. Your enthusiasm and support helped greatly. <3

Comments

[carpemermaid.livejournal.com]

Fagsjfkgfgshajaksjfhggjjfkkjwhjeit yaaaaaasssssss! *STILL a gurgling mess over that dream and everything that happens after it*

[maccadole.livejournal.com]

Hurrah!! I'm possibly not sorry at all for making you a mess. ;)

[cap-bookworm.livejournal.com]

Dkdocnsoan IT'S THE BEST THING IN THE WORLD. YOU'RE MY FAVORITE. <3 omfg. This is everything I ever wanted.

[maccadole.livejournal.com]

Hi hi hi! Your keyboard mash is beautiful.

You're my favorite as well. You deserve this and all other fic too, with all the kinks and tropes.

[http://users.livejournal.com/_melodic_/]

Oh holy hell that was so smoking hot. I think you broke my brain… No, I know you broke my brain. Why do I always make the mistake of reading the stories on public transport? Either way, I hope everyone on the train looked over my shoulder and got a glimpse of this fantastic story.

You really had me going at the beginning, I was like… Well this is an interesting twist but I was totally up for the ride. When we realized it was a dream everything made a bit more sense but I just knew there was more to come. I love how brazen James was just going at it in bed and how Albus was lit on fire by his brothers actions.

And then James just jumps in and gives Albus one of the best rim jobs ever… Seriously I could read hundreds and hundreds of more words of James's mouth all over Albus's hole.

What a delicious and delectable story. I read the whole thing with my jaw dropped wide. The ending was very lovely as well. I just want to read more and more of your James and Albus … This could easily be a fantastic series ;-)

[maccadole.livejournal.com]

AAAHHH, you're too kind. Thank you for reading and thanks for leaving this amazing comment. Sorry about my late reply.

Goosh, I'm thrilled it worked for you. I've never written rimming before so I'm ecstatic that you enjoyed it and could've read more. That's the ultimate praise.

The dream sequence was something I was a little worried about. I was wondering if the writing would seem really off what with how sudden things changed, but I also knew I wanted it nonsensical without addressing it. I took a gamble and I liked the way it came out. I'm happy to hear things made sense when it was revealed it was a dream, haha. ;)

Either way, I hope everyone on the train looked over my shoulder and got a glimpse of this fantastic story.

Ahahahahah, oh gods, can you imagine? Thank you. LOL <3